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Lauren's avatar

"Conquered" feels a bit intense. I originally intended to use "penetrated" instead in the first sentence, but it felt too charged.

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Doyin Olagunju's avatar

Never stop writing.

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Sun-Man's avatar

Trading massages with my coworker has created this kind of field but more nuanced and reciprocal. She is a woman as you describe, with spiritual poise and physical beauty. We’re both married but the physical and the emotional resonance from our work on each other has created some deep psychic space that only we can inhabit. Talk about oxytocin…That’s how biochemistry interfaces with and even facilitates a sacred connection.

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