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Lauren's avatar

"Conquered" feels a bit intense. I originally intended to use "penetrated" instead in the first sentence, but it felt too charged.

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Mike Ketch Poetry's avatar

Great piece of work, I thoroughly enjoyed the depth and profundity. Your words sing like a crystal and ring like a Tibetan bowl. 🌞🧡✍️

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